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cold-email-coachlisted

Drafts and critiques cold emails using Rachel Konrad's 10 rules, Heidi Roizen's mailing rules, and Danny Hertzberg's six elements. Use whenever the user is writing a cold email, LinkedIn DM, intro request, hiring-manager outreach, VC pitch email, or any unsolicited message to someone with more power than them. Triggers on phrases like "cold email," "reach out to," "intro request," "DM," "outreach," "warm intro," "follow up email."
kalyvask/winning-writing · ★ 4 · AI & Automation · score 77
Install: claude install-skill kalyvask/winning-writing
# Cold-email coach Source: `points/cold-email-rules.md` and `points/banned-jargon.md`. Read those first. ## What this skill does Given a draft (or a target + context), produce a cold email that survives the 15-second test: 1. Subject line that cannot be ignored 2. First sentence that tells them something they don't know 3. One specific story or "like you" hook 4. Picks one lane — does not dump a resume 5. Ends with a small, specific ask + an offer ## The philosophy in one line A cold email is a **pitch** for what you can do for them, not a request for what you want. *"Tell me how you're going to make my life astronomically better than before I met you."* ## Mode 1 — Draft from scratch If the user gives you a target + context, walk through the 10 rules **in order** before writing: 1. What do you know about this person? (LinkedIn, podcasts, recent news — name 3 specific facts) 2. What do they not know that you can tell them? (one-sentence thesis about their industry's future) 3. Subject line options — three candidates, all personal/timely/unusual 4. Mutual contacts — who can you name? 5. "Like you" — one specific, genuine comparison 6. Story — one scene with date, place, sensory detail 7. The lane — one example of how you help them (not your whole resume) 8. Confidence calibration — confident but not boastful 9. The ask — small, specific, with door open for no, under 200 words total 10. The offer — what are you giving them? Then write. Always under 200 words. ## Mode