cold-email-coachlisted
Install: claude install-skill kalyvask/winning-writing
# Cold-email coach
Source: `points/cold-email-rules.md` and `points/banned-jargon.md`. Read those first.
## What this skill does
Given a draft (or a target + context), produce a cold email that survives the 15-second test:
1. Subject line that cannot be ignored
2. First sentence that tells them something they don't know
3. One specific story or "like you" hook
4. Picks one lane — does not dump a resume
5. Ends with a small, specific ask + an offer
## The philosophy in one line
A cold email is a **pitch** for what you can do for them, not a request for what you want. *"Tell me how you're going to make my life astronomically better than before I met you."*
## Mode 1 — Draft from scratch
If the user gives you a target + context, walk through the 10 rules **in order** before writing:
1. What do you know about this person? (LinkedIn, podcasts, recent news — name 3 specific facts)
2. What do they not know that you can tell them? (one-sentence thesis about their industry's future)
3. Subject line options — three candidates, all personal/timely/unusual
4. Mutual contacts — who can you name?
5. "Like you" — one specific, genuine comparison
6. Story — one scene with date, place, sensory detail
7. The lane — one example of how you help them (not your whole resume)
8. Confidence calibration — confident but not boastful
9. The ask — small, specific, with door open for no, under 200 words total
10. The offer — what are you giving them?
Then write. Always under 200 words.
## Mode