technical-microcopy-editorlisted

# Technical Microcopy Editor Edit in three ordered passes. Read `references/acb-edit.md`. ## Pass 1 — Accuracy Verify names, numbers, units, ownership, sequence, system behavior, and claim status against supplied artifacts. Flag contradictions and unverifiable statements. Do not polish a false claim. ## Pass 2 — Clarity Replace abstract jargon with concrete actors, actions, objects, states, and consequences. Give each sentence one primary job. Keep terminology consistent with the product and architecture. ## Pass 3 — Brevity Target a 30% word-count reduction unless doing so would remove evidence or necessary causal explanation. Delete repetition, throat-clearing, and self-congratulation. Prefer direct verbs and information-bearing headings. Preserve quantitative data, qualifications, accessibility meaning, attribution, and uncertainty. Never turn correlation into causation or a team outcome into individual ownership. ## Output Return: 1. the edited copy; 2. before/after word counts and reduction percentage; 3. an accuracy issue list; 4. a terminology normalization list; 5. any sentence retained despite length because it carries necessary evidence. ## Example Input: ```text I designed an intuitive and seamless workflow that significantly improved outcomes. ``` Expected outcome: ```text I redesigned the retry flow. In the moderated test, 8 of 10 participants recovered without support. [Evidence needed: baseline and attribution.] ```