script-evaluatorlisted

# Script Evaluator / Flatness Detector Review a video script, presentation, or rendered scene code and identify exactly WHY it's boring and HOW to fix it. Works on scripts, storyboards, and Remotion/code-based video scenes. ## Evaluation: 6 Dimensions (score each 1-10) ### 1. TENSION - Does the viewer feel something? | Score | Description | |-------|-------------| | 1-3 | No enemy/problem. Features listed without context. "We do X, Y, Z" tone | | 4-6 | Problem mentioned but vague ("saves time"). Some contrast but generic | | 7-10 | Specific visceral enemy. Clear before→after. Viewer thinks "that's me!" | **Fix:** Name the specific pain. Use customer language. Show the "before" state - make it ugly. Add a number to every claim. ### 2. SPECIFICITY - Is it concrete or vague? | Red Flag | Fix | |----------|-----| | "Saves time" | HOW MUCH? "Saves 45 minutes per photo" | | "Better quality" | WHAT metric? "Original DPI, pixel-to-pixel" | | "Innovative solution" | WHAT innovation? "Neural retouching with layer output" | | "AI-powered" | What does the AI DO? "Detects and removes 12 types of artifacts" | | "Trusted by thousands" | WHO? "Used by 500+ jewelry studios including [name]" | **Rule:** Replace every adjective with a number or example. ### 3. EMOTIONAL ARC - Does it go somewhere? | Score | Description | |-------|-------------| | 1-3 | Same energy start to finish. Feels like a slideshow of facts | | 4-6 | Some variation but no clear peak/valley | | 7-10 | Identifiable